
Wind whispers through my leaves.
I try to open my eyes but nothing happens.
Yesterdays adventures rush back to me.
My body a tree but my mind still human.
I wonder whether trees sleep.
I figure they must-I slept the whole night through soundlessly.
I feel the sun on the tips of my branches.
Water rushes through my roots like rivers of blood-entirely mine.
The day slips past slowly-but quickly all the same.
"Kitty Kat..." I hear my master the great Elm call.
He whispers to me in tree tongue.
I try to resist his powers-his attempts to turn me into a tree forever but I can't.
I fell my roots lengthen clinging more and more to the slippery earth.
I finally feel his feet retreat and go back to whatever he was doing before now.
I can barely think now.
I can remember who I am but now why I can't move.
Slowly I feel small vibrations in the ground.
They get stronger and stronger until they stop suddenly in front of me.
I listen.
I hear nothing so I slip back into my dream.
I've just got to thinking about how nice the sun feels on my tips when I feel myself beginning to change.
My branches grow shorter, along with my roots and trunk.
I feel my hands return followed by my legs, head, hair and every other part of me.
I gasp as air fills my lungs.
I see Imij standing on front of of me but my instinct takes over and I run.
I don't know where I'm running or why.
After what seems like hours I arrive at an empty Pa site.
Dusk is falling and I find some more Monkey Tails to eat for dinner.
I lie down on the hard ground to sleep but bad thoughts drift through my mind.
I'm awake until midnight-or later but eventually, I fall asleep.
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6 comments:
kiity kat - this is stunning writing - you have a gift!
i was heard to expostulate - "omigod! this is brilliant!"
just ask my wife.
8-)
... time to go cook dinner - enjoy your evening
These are wonderful, Kitty Kat! Fast-paced chapters that catch you up in their mystery- but you might want to think HOW you say all these wonderful things, scentence structure etc, because sometimes the story's a bit hard to follow. Just a thought. P.S. you might want to include bits that explain WHY things happen and HOW they happen in clearer, closer detail.
YOU ARE A TALENTED WRITER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
now that you have posted this on your blog, people can see that trees have a personality.
pim:P
ohhh...thanks Mr Woody...K.O.D and Pim!!!!!
nice writting. drop a commet on my blog
yes, Kod has a point, but i can follow it - maybe a few more details to explain each event or scene. i know what is going on because i was there at it's inception, but others maybe struggle to follow it unless reasonable background or detail is included. i love it though!
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