Wednesday, March 28, 2007

Day 5 Diary


Wind whispers through my leaves.

I try to open my eyes but nothing happens.

Yesterdays adventures rush back to me.

My body a tree but my mind still human.


I wonder whether trees sleep.

I figure they must-I slept the whole night through soundlessly.


I feel the sun on the tips of my branches.

Water rushes through my roots like rivers of blood-entirely mine.


The day slips past slowly-but quickly all the same.


"Kitty Kat..." I hear my master the great Elm call.

He whispers to me in tree tongue.

I try to resist his powers-his attempts to turn me into a tree forever but I can't.

I fell my roots lengthen clinging more and more to the slippery earth.

I finally feel his feet retreat and go back to whatever he was doing before now.


I can barely think now.

I can remember who I am but now why I can't move.


Slowly I feel small vibrations in the ground.

They get stronger and stronger until they stop suddenly in front of me.

I listen.

I hear nothing so I slip back into my dream.

I've just got to thinking about how nice the sun feels on my tips when I feel myself beginning to change.

My branches grow shorter, along with my roots and trunk.

I feel my hands return followed by my legs, head, hair and every other part of me.

I gasp as air fills my lungs.

I see Imij standing on front of of me but my instinct takes over and I run.


I don't know where I'm running or why.

After what seems like hours I arrive at an empty Pa site.

Dusk is falling and I find some more Monkey Tails to eat for dinner.

I lie down on the hard ground to sleep but bad thoughts drift through my mind.

I'm awake until midnight-or later but eventually, I fall asleep.


Photo Referance:Google Images-www.plantwise.co.nz/graphics/monkey_tail.jpg

6 comments:

MrWoody said...

kiity kat - this is stunning writing - you have a gift!
i was heard to expostulate - "omigod! this is brilliant!"
just ask my wife.
8-)
... time to go cook dinner - enjoy your evening

Precious said...

These are wonderful, Kitty Kat! Fast-paced chapters that catch you up in their mystery- but you might want to think HOW you say all these wonderful things, scentence structure etc, because sometimes the story's a bit hard to follow. Just a thought. P.S. you might want to include bits that explain WHY things happen and HOW they happen in clearer, closer detail.

primprim said...

YOU ARE A TALENTED WRITER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
now that you have posted this on your blog, people can see that trees have a personality.
pim:P

Kitty Kat said...

ohhh...thanks Mr Woody...K.O.D and Pim!!!!!

Anonymous said...

nice writting. drop a commet on my blog

MrWoody said...

yes, Kod has a point, but i can follow it - maybe a few more details to explain each event or scene. i know what is going on because i was there at it's inception, but others maybe struggle to follow it unless reasonable background or detail is included. i love it though!