
Day Three
A low rumbling hits the air. I groan in my sleep and roll over.
A low rumbling hits the air. I groan in my sleep and roll over.
"Kitty Kat!!" I hear someone call.
"Be quiet Mum," I mumble.
"No Kitty Kat its me, WAKE UP!"
I finally snap awake. An ear bursting noise hits my ears. It rumbles making the entire ground vibrate. I hear Skipper Bob burst into tears beside me but then the sound stops and we all snap to earth.
We decide to follow the sound but prepare ourselves well firsts.
We get sticks and sharpen there points.
Ms Candy takes the knife and we set off.
Again we slit trees but its harder work as we're carrying all of our gear.
After a while we come across a huge rock with what looks like a small cave entrance in the middle.
We decide to carry on and find a better place to camp.
We come to a clearing but there are animal tracks going through it making it an impossible place to camp.
We look around for a safer place near here but there is nothing.
Eventually we decide to the cave. We throw rocks in to check that the tunnel is safe. We here nothing out of the ordinary so we head in. From the light of our stick we realise that there is a sharp corner. We throw more rocks around the corner. We think it is safe, so we continue.
After another two minutes we find a fork in our path. Right is always luckier so we head down that path. Suddenly, I can't breathe. I'm stuck in a massive, sticky mass. I call out to Skipper Bob behind me. My mind races. Suddenly the place lights up and I can see.
Skipper Bob has lit a match.
Overnight
Overnight
Ms Candy frantically begins to cut.
After ten minutes shes freed herself and Skipper Bob and begins cutting me free.
Suddenly we hear scuttling.
I'm almost free but we can now see two massive brown hairy legs.
My mind is screaming.
I'm sure I'm about to die.. Suddenly I'm yanked away screaming my head off.
I see two bright yellow eyes looking down on me then darkness.
Day Four
Light hits my eyes.
Skipper Bob and Ms Candy are crouching next to me.
I groan.
"What happened?" I ask, my words all slurred.
"Spider bite," Skipper Bob says.
My side aches as they help me to my feet.
I notice a necklace around my neck but I'm too weak to ask what it's for.
We walk slowly but I can tell Skipper Bob and Ms Candy are in a rush.
We find ourselves in a cavern, there's a high pole with a small platform on the top in the middle of a small lake.
I think I can see a small box on top of the platform but I am not sure.
Skipper Bob and Ms Candy begin to whisper to each other.
I sit down on the bank of the lake and watch the water lap at my feet.
I see Ms Candy wade into the lake and Skipper Bob sits down next to me.
"She's going to swim to the platform, in the middle, "Skipper Bob tells me.
We sit silently and watch Ms Candy.
After a few long minutes shes almost reached the edge of the platform.
Then we see them.
Four no five no six long black snake like figures swimming towards Ms Candy.
They must be a giant eel of some sort, we can tell that from the slithering movement of the creatures body.
Ms Candy pulls herself from the lake just in time.
She stands and turns to us.
We hold our breaths.
She waves and me and Skipper Bob finally relax.
She climbs up the platform then opens the box.
We see her rummage around inside then stand once more and dive of, into the water, out of our site.
End of Day Three/Overnight/Four Diary
Photo Referance: Google Images: www.unifiedworlds.com/FranklinGypsumCave_entr...
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11 comments:
marvellous work, kittykat.
this is a champion blog!
Mr Woody sagde...
wow! this is an amazing adventure you are relating. your grammar and use of punctuation is spot on. well done for recalling all the details of our discussions with the group.
i wonder what will happen next!
great inclusion of the cave picture - where did you get it?
if it's borrowed you should acknowledge the source.
you have earned a certificate!
12. marts 2007 16:23
Kitty Kat sagde...
I've put the referance on now-and for the rest of my photos!!
12. marts 2007 20:49
primprim sagde...
i feel as if i am reading a masterpice!
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!
i shall consider you as an expert writer.
prim:P
12. marts 2007 20:55
Kitty Kat sagde...
oh thankyou very much prim i also concider you as an expert riter after the australasion test last year...
12. marts 2007 23:14
IM A ROOM5IAN sagde...
i love you story kit de kat it is extremely descriptive and exiting, it must have taken a long time to type that up although i think that it was worth it! your kitty cat also looks very cute and i love her name ! my cat is called dash and he, like jewel, is a beautiful cat. his coat is a sleek shiny black and he has a white patch under his chin, that is also where he likes to be scratched. well enough about dash, pease leave a comment on my blog and ill see you tomorrow, bibi
13. marts 2007 21:02
Kitty Kat sagde...
thankyou verrry much room5ian i think i just commented......
14. marts 2007 01:02
its cool how you did that kittykat. it must have taken ages.
oh and you might want to put word verification on you new blogs
you are a good writer!
i like the format of how you wrote, your stories are truly unique!
pim:P
great story, i really enjoyed it! maybe you could add some breath-taking parts to make the adventure Top-notch!
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